Monday, August 17, 2009

The Magical Hairbrush

Written by Sarah K (age 13) from Perak, Malaysia

Zomann, the dark wizard of the cold north suddenly appeared before Coan and swept him off to adventure with his fiery rod. They landed on a bed of trampled reed grass.

Coan got up, regained his composure and said, "Who are you and why am I here?".

Zomann replied, "I'm looking for my magical hairbrush. I think you know where it is. Are you willing to help me?".

"May I know who you are first?" said Coan feeling very impatient.

"Yes, of course. I am Zomann, the dark wizard from Dilly Dally Valley. As you can see, I'm in my towel because during your time travel here, I took a bath. Now that I've told you my name, will you help me?"

"Yes," replied Coan.

So, they ventured off miles away from Dilly Dalley Valley and into the woods of Polnudk. As they passed through, they saw green glowing eyes in the misty fog.

Coan crept closer to Zomann and whispered, "Are you sure this is safe?".

"Sure, I go through here all the time," Zomann boasted.

Then suddenly, a gust of strong wind blew onto their faces. "Roar!" shouted a creature from the cave.

"Is that you, Bearzo?" Zomann asked excitedly.

"Zomann, is that you?" said the creature harshly.

"I want you to met my friend, Coan."

"Hi," said Bearzo happily. "Sorry, I didn't know that you are looking for your hairbrush. I gave it to the sand witch because she has hair and you don't."

"No hair? How could this be?" said Zomann surprised.

And so, they went home sadly. Coan was sent home. During Zomann's free time, he would invent potions to grow his hair back so that he can get his hairbrush back.

The end.

Hi Sarah,
What an interesting story! I think Zomann will take a long time to succeed in inventing the potion for growing hair. Why? Because he's from Dilly Dalley Valley! Ha ha ha.
Love ... Aunty M